We are currently learning about how to write entertaining beginnings to our stories. We talked about how the beginning of a story forms our first impression and that we want it to be a good one. One that holds the reader’s attention. To identify beginnings that are effective, we first had to look at beginnings that generally aren’t effective (or are tired and overdone). Here are some common ineffective beginnings:
Once upon a time….
One hot, summer day…
Long ago in a far away place…
Hi my name is Joe.
This is my story about a pirate who finds treasure on a buried island.
Tonight your child will bring home a newsletter that gives more details about how to write an “Entertaining Beginning”. Your child will be expected to use action, dialogue, thoughts or feelings, or sound effects (or a combination of all) to begin a story. To help them write entertaining beginnings, your child is should try to identify entertaining beginnings when they read. They can make a list at home and write down their favourite beginnings – ones that really grabbed their attention and made them want to read more.